C.J. Mustang

I hope you're going to write some more to that, because it kept me hooked 'til the very end. now, does this big bad doctor man like the lady doctor? ...

hey, thanx for the comments! nothin but praise so far... :elephant: YES!!! anywho, yes Fall_Into_The_Sky, he is a gangster, like the whole baggy pants underwear showing thing, and yes aestar101, ...

Well hi there! I just read one of your stories (it totally rocked, by the way!), and just wanted to let you know that for every story you post you ...

Hey. Just want to tell you if you didn't red the rules: you need to post 2 reviews before you submit 1 story. And also, between every paragraph, make sure ...

Previuosly 'Alex' and 'Gangster'. Chapter 2 "Aren't you glad that mom and dad let us wander around for a bit?" Joe asked me. "Yep. Thrilled," I answered with lack of ...

This was an awesome first part of the story! I have to hurry and write this so I can read the next part, but I saw a couple of funny ...

dude, you're so awesome! this totally rocked! very sad, but awesomely written! Kudos, I've got nothin but praise for ya. I would also like to say thanks for reviewing my ...

Prologue What’s going on, Galen? Is everything all right? asked Suoh. We never use this part of your cave unless it's an emergency. Yes, yes, everything’s fine, Galen rumbled deep ...

hey! I think your poem is awesome, but like others have said before, it could use some punctuation. I know some people have offered you some suggestions, but here are ...

Hey. That sounded kind of dark to me, and it was totally awesome, not that I'm a dark person or anything. I could totally picture the whole thing. Kudos. :wink:

Holy crap that made me want to cry! In a good, sad way though, not a "OMG I can't even finish this sentence I need to print it and burn ...

Hey! Awesome story! The only thing that I found that needs a little work is the transition from the hospital to the house. You could say that there was so ...

Hey! How's it goin'? I just heard about this website today, but now I have to leave very quickly, so I just thought I'd say hi real quick. so.... HI!

Previuosly 'Alex' and 'Gangster'. Chapter 1 “Rebecca! Dad's waiting, Let's go!” said Mom, trying to juggle all of her bags at once. I glanced at her but then my eye ...